User contributions for Douglas
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
10 December 2016
- 16:0216:02, 10 December 2016 diff hist +3 Template:Government No edit summary
- 15:5815:58, 10 December 2016 diff hist +144 Governments add commas; add a few words to clarify or fix run on sentences
9 December 2016
- 12:3212:32, 9 December 2016 diff hist +34 Money add more commas, and add a few clarifying words
- 11:0011:00, 9 December 2016 diff hist +21 Money commas and added a few words
30 November 2016
- 12:1912:19, 30 November 2016 diff hist +16 Cities of refuge →Cities of Refuge: add commas; changed "distant" to "distinct"
28 November 2016
- 12:2412:24, 28 November 2016 diff hist +9 Matthew 5 add apostrophe; add commas; fix a run-on sentence
27 November 2016
- 01:0201:02, 27 November 2016 diff hist +15 Family trusts add commas ... fixed one run-on sentence. Good work. This topic is much needed for helping families.
- 00:5100:51, 27 November 2016 diff hist −1 m Family trusts →Revocability or irrevocability
24 November 2016
- 01:5501:55, 24 November 2016 diff hist +56 Template:Right of Self-determination some errors were simple to fix; one was perplexing: * You have contracted and coveted ... done that. Maybe change it to "you've done that" current
- 00:3300:33, 24 November 2016 diff hist +37 Golem spelling errors and other errors fixed, added commas
- 00:1900:19, 24 November 2016 diff hist +93 Template:Self-ownership add commas; add "State's interests, duties and investments" clause. Added some dashes. What is Gomel? It is right before "corporate entity" current
22 November 2016
- 19:5619:56, 22 November 2016 diff hist +974 Template:Forgive →Forgiveness works: added some thoughts about exoneration and a footnote about forbearance.
- 19:0419:04, 22 November 2016 diff hist +110 Template:Forgive add commas; After "term nasa' is translated forgive ... " , I worked on problems in the next sentence. I hope it still has the intended message.
17 November 2016
- 23:5923:59, 17 November 2016 diff hist +98 Hierarchy add commas; add words (such as 'it') for sake of clarity
- 23:0323:03, 17 November 2016 diff hist +53 Hierarchy add commas; fix run-on sentences (for good message clarity).
14 November 2016
- 12:4912:49, 14 November 2016 diff hist +338 Temptations add commas, add clarifying words; add to the last para before double lines
- 01:5301:53, 14 November 2016 diff hist +1,568 Talk:Trust I added a several thoughts current
13 November 2016
- 12:4812:48, 13 November 2016 diff hist −24 Follow the White Rabbit →Transcript: making transcript accurate to the audio, part 1 of my work
- 12:0712:07, 13 November 2016 diff hist +1,206 N Talk:Trust An attempt to sum up the message. Ministers would be wise to thoroughly understand it and do accordingly.
- 11:5711:57, 13 November 2016 diff hist +39 Trust →Ministers of trust: add commas, clarify about the two churches, modify the warning that elders not look to the minister (it was slightly unclear, but is my approach better?)
- 11:3811:38, 13 November 2016 diff hist +27 Egypt add commas... I think "God told His people ... nor were their leaders ..." is more congruent, rather than "... us ... nor were their leaders" I wonder if the "(and us)" is needed.
- 11:2711:27, 13 November 2016 diff hist +31 Logos add commas, remove an extra 'a'
11 November 2016
- 09:4509:45, 11 November 2016 diff hist +23 Trust fix spelling errors, add commas, add a few missing words
10 November 2016
- 01:3801:38, 10 November 2016 diff hist +309 Apply Ten Commandments Add comments about the first 'word'
6 November 2016
- 12:3512:35, 6 November 2016 diff hist +1,063 Apply Ten Commandments Add to footnotes; add some text
5 November 2016
- 20:1320:13, 5 November 2016 diff hist +29 m Template:Government add references/ tag
- 20:1120:11, 5 November 2016 diff hist +11 Minarchism add commas and fix spelling errors
- 20:0520:05, 5 November 2016 diff hist +9 Template:Government Add commas, fix a spelling error
29 October 2016
- 12:0912:09, 29 October 2016 diff hist +40 Ease into freedom add commas, and add a few words in the last paragraph
26 October 2016
- 10:4010:40, 26 October 2016 diff hist +16 Template:Golden rule add commas. Fix an incorrect sentence break before the word "which".
25 October 2016
- 14:1814:18, 25 October 2016 diff hist +1,149 Apply Ten Commandments Adding info about the list of words (verse 1)
- 13:2813:28, 25 October 2016 diff hist +5 Ye are bought →Bought: a few commas added
- 13:2513:25, 25 October 2016 diff hist +101 Ye are bought →The Liberty Way: add commas and clarifying words. I hope "That is what it means to gather in the name of Christ" is an accurate correction, instead of "That means to gather ..."
- 13:1013:10, 25 October 2016 diff hist +31 Ye are bought →Sold and Numbered: add commas and clarifying words
- 09:5909:59, 25 October 2016 diff hist +4,572 N Apply Ten Commandments Explaining in depth
- 08:2308:23, 25 October 2016 diff hist +137 Ten Commandments Starting up the page for deeper discussion on Ten Commandments
24 October 2016
- 23:3223:32, 24 October 2016 diff hist +303 Template:10table →The Laws of God: modified what I added earlier today, in an attempt to heed good suggestions of feedback
- 15:0115:01, 24 October 2016 diff hist +772 Template:10table →The Laws of God: added a few more thoughts, to clarify
- 12:0712:07, 24 October 2016 diff hist +418 N Talk:NAP Discussion to reveal a pacifist's fallacy current
- 12:0012:00, 24 October 2016 diff hist +648 NAP adding some thoughts of mine, to help drive the point: a network is essential for righteously counter-attacking oppressors
23 October 2016
- 23:5523:55, 23 October 2016 diff hist +48 Redemption →Trafficker in Commerce: removed consecutive duplicate words, add commas, add clarifying words
22 October 2016
- 18:1118:11, 22 October 2016 diff hist +873 Burnt offering Explain the singer in a footnote
- 18:0318:03, 22 October 2016 diff hist +31 Burnt offering add link
- 18:0118:01, 22 October 2016 diff hist −3 Burnt offering change welfare link
- 17:5417:54, 22 October 2016 diff hist −5 Burnt offering bullets?
- 17:5217:52, 22 October 2016 diff hist +11 Burnt offering indenting?
- 17:4917:49, 22 October 2016 diff hist −7 m Burnt offering No edit summary
- 17:4717:47, 22 October 2016 diff hist +86 Burnt offering Add comments about an offering is given
- 17:4217:42, 22 October 2016 diff hist +373 Burnt offering Add comment about church ministers and describing some about the altar of Christ; add links
- 17:3317:33, 22 October 2016 diff hist +33 Burnt offering clarify
- 17:2217:22, 22 October 2016 diff hist +325 Burnt offering Add footnote to describe a modern civil altar more clearly. Ancient Rome also had its civil altars. I'm not the best writer to add such comments about Rome.
- 17:1617:16, 22 October 2016 diff hist +904 Burnt offering add links
- 16:5516:55, 22 October 2016 diff hist +4 Burnt offering Link to Corban page
- 16:5016:50, 22 October 2016 diff hist +3,274 Burnt offering Add reference to Lev. 28 and other related scriptures
- 12:2012:20, 22 October 2016 diff hist +1,177 N 'strange fire' Definitions could be added, to more clearly define 'fire'
- 12:1012:10, 22 October 2016 diff hist +531 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 12:0112:01, 22 October 2016 diff hist −6 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 12:0012:00, 22 October 2016 diff hist +36 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 11:5911:59, 22 October 2016 diff hist +2,679 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 11:2911:29, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69 N Burnt offering add link
- 11:1811:18, 22 October 2016 diff hist 0 m Society and community No edit summary
- 11:1711:17, 22 October 2016 diff hist +210 Society and community add reference to Prov 22; add commas and clarifying words
- 11:0311:03, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69 Supreme being Fixing some wording, to clarify the message
- 10:4210:42, 22 October 2016 diff hist +33 Altruism the second sentence did not make sense; I think I fixed the problem.
21 October 2016
- 21:5121:51, 21 October 2016 diff hist +153 Bible add commas; add a few clarifying words
- 21:2121:21, 21 October 2016 diff hist +98 Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God add commas and some clarifying words
- 20:5320:53, 21 October 2016 diff hist +122 Exiting Babylon add commas and clarifying words
20 October 2016
- 15:2715:27, 20 October 2016 diff hist +71 Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God Fix links
14 October 2016
- 09:4709:47, 14 October 2016 diff hist +18 Bible →Some Questions: add commas and semicolon
- 09:4009:40, 14 October 2016 diff hist +14 Bible →Christian Conflict: change 'and' to 'versus', which denotes the contrast
- 09:3409:34, 14 October 2016 diff hist +6 Bible →The Purpose of Sacrifice: add commas and a dash
- 09:2809:28, 14 October 2016 diff hist +59 Bible add commas; add links; expound slightly about the Pharisee view
10 October 2016
- 16:4616:46, 10 October 2016 diff hist +83 Template:Repentance add commas and words needed to make good sentence structures
7 October 2016
- 23:4123:41, 7 October 2016 diff hist +241 Merchandise add commas; add a thought to contrast with "the beast in us kills the soul", and it acts as a lead-in with what follows that paragraph
- 23:0623:06, 7 October 2016 diff hist +61 Free assemblies add commas, add clarifying words; add one sentence in the conclusion, to drive the final point home
- 15:2215:22, 7 October 2016 diff hist +855 Anarchist →Leaders without Rulers: added a sentence to connect leaders and rulers (in the world), and references about world (kosmos) and heaven (ouranos). I used eSword. You might have a better way of explaining world and heaven in the footnotes.
- 11:2611:26, 7 October 2016 diff hist +476 Anarchist add commas and add a Bible passage related to archon
5 October 2016
- 22:4822:48, 5 October 2016 diff hist +60 Contract add commas and some words
- 22:3622:36, 5 October 2016 diff hist +32 m Template:Benefactors of the Slothful →The Slothful
- 22:3522:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +40 Template:Benefactors of the Slothful →The Slothful: commas added
- 22:2222:22, 5 October 2016 diff hist +48 Template:Covet →The Great Society Scheme: add commas and a few words
- 21:5621:56, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8 Template:Covet →The Effects of Covetousness: commas and clarifying words
- 21:3521:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +225 Template:Covet →Covet: changed the quote from Merriam-Webster, so that more info about the synonyms is included, but now it is not a direct quote (as it was before)
- 18:2718:27, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8 m Religion No edit summary
- 15:1215:12, 5 October 2016 diff hist +603 Religion add commas and clarifying words; also added some content to False Religion
4 October 2016
- 14:2214:22, 4 October 2016 diff hist +10 Fiction of law →Modern Legal definition: add commas and clarifying words
- 14:1514:15, 4 October 2016 diff hist +25 Fiction of law →Examples: add commas and words for clarity
- 14:0414:04, 4 October 2016 diff hist +65 Fiction of law →Legal Fiction: add commas
- 13:5113:51, 4 October 2016 diff hist +288 Fiction of law add commas and clarifying words
- 12:4212:42, 4 October 2016 diff hist +26 Fiction of law clarify the quick definition
- 11:0511:05, 4 October 2016 diff hist +133 Undocumented add commas and clarifying words; making correct sentence structures. The writer does his part (an important part), and the grammarian does his part. Teamwork! Blessings to you.
3 October 2016
- 11:3511:35, 3 October 2016 diff hist +9 Golden rule add commas
- 11:2411:24, 3 October 2016 diff hist +963 N Talk:Creed of the Apostles Drawing attention to one paragraph (and then, if you wish, you could delete this section of discussion after the paragraph is modified)
- 11:1011:10, 3 October 2016 diff hist +23 Creed of the Apostles add commas and add words to help with clarity of message; see discussion page
1 October 2016
- 23:3423:34, 1 October 2016 diff hist 0 m Sarcasm fix link
- 23:3223:32, 1 October 2016 diff hist +72 Sarcasm add links
- 23:1823:18, 1 October 2016 diff hist +1,581 Sarcasm Added Isa. 28 and Sarcasm etymology; compassion and mockery do not mix ... feel free to adjust the message, if you have a wider view or clearer way to describe
30 September 2016
- 23:3123:31, 30 September 2016 diff hist +103 Template:Eyes three Hebrew words: only middle letter is different ... I hope I helped clarify. Shem letter has to do with what?
- 01:2501:25, 30 September 2016 diff hist +7 Romans 11 add commas
- 01:2001:20, 30 September 2016 diff hist +59 Hebrews 8 add commas and a few words to complete the sentence structure