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22 October 2016
- 18:0118:01, 22 October 2016 diff hist −3 Burnt offering change welfare link
- 17:5417:54, 22 October 2016 diff hist −5 Burnt offering bullets?
- 17:5217:52, 22 October 2016 diff hist +11 Burnt offering indenting?
- 17:4917:49, 22 October 2016 diff hist −7 m Burnt offering No edit summary
- 17:4717:47, 22 October 2016 diff hist +86 Burnt offering Add comments about an offering is given
- 17:4217:42, 22 October 2016 diff hist +373 Burnt offering Add comment about church ministers and describing some about the altar of Christ; add links
- 17:3317:33, 22 October 2016 diff hist +33 Burnt offering clarify
- 17:2217:22, 22 October 2016 diff hist +325 Burnt offering Add footnote to describe a modern civil altar more clearly. Ancient Rome also had its civil altars. I'm not the best writer to add such comments about Rome.
- 17:1617:16, 22 October 2016 diff hist +904 Burnt offering add links
- 16:5516:55, 22 October 2016 diff hist +4 Burnt offering Link to Corban page
- 16:5016:50, 22 October 2016 diff hist +3,274 Burnt offering Add reference to Lev. 28 and other related scriptures
- 12:2012:20, 22 October 2016 diff hist +1,177 N 'strange fire' Definitions could be added, to more clearly define 'fire'
- 12:1012:10, 22 October 2016 diff hist +531 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 12:0112:01, 22 October 2016 diff hist −6 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 12:0012:00, 22 October 2016 diff hist +36 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 11:5911:59, 22 October 2016 diff hist +2,679 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 11:2911:29, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69 N Burnt offering add link
- 11:1811:18, 22 October 2016 diff hist 0 m Society and community No edit summary
- 11:1711:17, 22 October 2016 diff hist +210 Society and community add reference to Prov 22; add commas and clarifying words
- 11:0311:03, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69 Supreme being Fixing some wording, to clarify the message
- 10:4210:42, 22 October 2016 diff hist +33 Altruism the second sentence did not make sense; I think I fixed the problem.
21 October 2016
- 21:5121:51, 21 October 2016 diff hist +153 Bible add commas; add a few clarifying words
- 21:2121:21, 21 October 2016 diff hist +98 Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God add commas and some clarifying words
- 20:5320:53, 21 October 2016 diff hist +122 Exiting Babylon add commas and clarifying words
20 October 2016
- 15:2715:27, 20 October 2016 diff hist +71 Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God Fix links
14 October 2016
- 09:4709:47, 14 October 2016 diff hist +18 Bible →Some Questions: add commas and semicolon
- 09:4009:40, 14 October 2016 diff hist +14 Bible →Christian Conflict: change 'and' to 'versus', which denotes the contrast
- 09:3409:34, 14 October 2016 diff hist +6 Bible →The Purpose of Sacrifice: add commas and a dash
- 09:2809:28, 14 October 2016 diff hist +59 Bible add commas; add links; expound slightly about the Pharisee view
10 October 2016
- 16:4616:46, 10 October 2016 diff hist +83 Template:Repentance add commas and words needed to make good sentence structures
7 October 2016
- 23:4123:41, 7 October 2016 diff hist +241 Merchandise add commas; add a thought to contrast with "the beast in us kills the soul", and it acts as a lead-in with what follows that paragraph
- 23:0623:06, 7 October 2016 diff hist +61 Free assemblies add commas, add clarifying words; add one sentence in the conclusion, to drive the final point home
- 15:2215:22, 7 October 2016 diff hist +855 Anarchist →Leaders without Rulers: added a sentence to connect leaders and rulers (in the world), and references about world (kosmos) and heaven (ouranos). I used eSword. You might have a better way of explaining world and heaven in the footnotes.
- 11:2611:26, 7 October 2016 diff hist +476 Anarchist add commas and add a Bible passage related to archon
5 October 2016
- 22:4822:48, 5 October 2016 diff hist +60 Contract add commas and some words
- 22:3622:36, 5 October 2016 diff hist +32 m Template:Benefactors of the Slothful →The Slothful
- 22:3522:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +40 Template:Benefactors of the Slothful →The Slothful: commas added
- 22:2222:22, 5 October 2016 diff hist +48 Template:Covet →The Great Society Scheme: add commas and a few words
- 21:5621:56, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8 Template:Covet →The Effects of Covetousness: commas and clarifying words
- 21:3521:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +225 Template:Covet →Covet: changed the quote from Merriam-Webster, so that more info about the synonyms is included, but now it is not a direct quote (as it was before)
- 18:2718:27, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8 m Religion No edit summary
- 15:1215:12, 5 October 2016 diff hist +603 Religion add commas and clarifying words; also added some content to False Religion
4 October 2016
- 14:2214:22, 4 October 2016 diff hist +10 Fiction of law →Modern Legal definition: add commas and clarifying words
- 14:1514:15, 4 October 2016 diff hist +25 Fiction of law →Examples: add commas and words for clarity
- 14:0414:04, 4 October 2016 diff hist +65 Fiction of law →Legal Fiction: add commas
- 13:5113:51, 4 October 2016 diff hist +288 Fiction of law add commas and clarifying words
- 12:4212:42, 4 October 2016 diff hist +26 Fiction of law clarify the quick definition
- 11:0511:05, 4 October 2016 diff hist +133 Undocumented add commas and clarifying words; making correct sentence structures. The writer does his part (an important part), and the grammarian does his part. Teamwork! Blessings to you.
3 October 2016
- 11:3511:35, 3 October 2016 diff hist +9 Golden rule add commas
- 11:2411:24, 3 October 2016 diff hist +963 N Talk:Creed of the Apostles Drawing attention to one paragraph (and then, if you wish, you could delete this section of discussion after the paragraph is modified)