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22 October 2016
- 16:2216:22, 22 October 2016 diff hist +325 Burnt offering Add footnote to describe a modern civil altar more clearly. Ancient Rome also had its civil altars. I'm not the best writer to add such comments about Rome.
- 16:1616:16, 22 October 2016 diff hist +904 Burnt offering add links
- 15:5515:55, 22 October 2016 diff hist +4 Burnt offering Link to Corban page
- 15:5015:50, 22 October 2016 diff hist +3,274 Burnt offering Add reference to Lev. 28 and other related scriptures
- 11:2011:20, 22 October 2016 diff hist +1,177 N 'strange fire' Definitions could be added, to more clearly define 'fire'
- 11:1011:10, 22 October 2016 diff hist +531 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 11:0111:01, 22 October 2016 diff hist −6 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 11:0011:00, 22 October 2016 diff hist +36 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 10:5910:59, 22 October 2016 diff hist +2,679 Burnt offering No edit summary
- 10:2910:29, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69 N Burnt offering add link
- 10:1810:18, 22 October 2016 diff hist 0 m Society and community No edit summary
- 10:1710:17, 22 October 2016 diff hist +210 Society and community add reference to Prov 22; add commas and clarifying words
- 10:0310:03, 22 October 2016 diff hist +69 Supreme being Fixing some wording, to clarify the message
- 09:4209:42, 22 October 2016 diff hist +33 Altruism the second sentence did not make sense; I think I fixed the problem.
21 October 2016
- 20:5120:51, 21 October 2016 diff hist +153 Bible add commas; add a few clarifying words
- 20:2120:21, 21 October 2016 diff hist +98 Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God add commas and some clarifying words
- 19:5319:53, 21 October 2016 diff hist +122 Exiting Babylon add commas and clarifying words
20 October 2016
- 14:2714:27, 20 October 2016 diff hist +71 Template:Seeking the Kingdom of God Fix links
14 October 2016
- 08:4708:47, 14 October 2016 diff hist +18 Bible →Some Questions: add commas and semicolon
- 08:4008:40, 14 October 2016 diff hist +14 Bible →Christian Conflict: change 'and' to 'versus', which denotes the contrast
- 08:3408:34, 14 October 2016 diff hist +6 Bible →The Purpose of Sacrifice: add commas and a dash
- 08:2808:28, 14 October 2016 diff hist +59 Bible add commas; add links; expound slightly about the Pharisee view
10 October 2016
- 15:4615:46, 10 October 2016 diff hist +83 Template:Repentance add commas and words needed to make good sentence structures
7 October 2016
- 22:4122:41, 7 October 2016 diff hist +241 Merchandise add commas; add a thought to contrast with "the beast in us kills the soul", and it acts as a lead-in with what follows that paragraph
- 22:0622:06, 7 October 2016 diff hist +61 Free assemblies add commas, add clarifying words; add one sentence in the conclusion, to drive the final point home
- 14:2214:22, 7 October 2016 diff hist +855 Anarchist →Leaders without Rulers: added a sentence to connect leaders and rulers (in the world), and references about world (kosmos) and heaven (ouranos). I used eSword. You might have a better way of explaining world and heaven in the footnotes.
- 10:2610:26, 7 October 2016 diff hist +476 Anarchist add commas and add a Bible passage related to archon
5 October 2016
- 21:4821:48, 5 October 2016 diff hist +60 Contract add commas and some words
- 21:3621:36, 5 October 2016 diff hist +32 m Template:Benefactors of the Slothful →The Slothful
- 21:3521:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +40 Template:Benefactors of the Slothful →The Slothful: commas added
- 21:2221:22, 5 October 2016 diff hist +48 Template:Covet →The Great Society Scheme: add commas and a few words
- 20:5620:56, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8 Template:Covet →The Effects of Covetousness: commas and clarifying words
- 20:3520:35, 5 October 2016 diff hist +225 Template:Covet →Covet: changed the quote from Merriam-Webster, so that more info about the synonyms is included, but now it is not a direct quote (as it was before)
- 17:2717:27, 5 October 2016 diff hist +8 m Religion No edit summary
- 14:1214:12, 5 October 2016 diff hist +603 Religion add commas and clarifying words; also added some content to False Religion
4 October 2016
- 13:2213:22, 4 October 2016 diff hist +10 Fiction of law →Modern Legal definition: add commas and clarifying words
- 13:1513:15, 4 October 2016 diff hist +25 Fiction of law →Examples: add commas and words for clarity
- 13:0413:04, 4 October 2016 diff hist +65 Fiction of law →Legal Fiction: add commas
- 12:5112:51, 4 October 2016 diff hist +288 Fiction of law add commas and clarifying words
- 11:4211:42, 4 October 2016 diff hist +26 Fiction of law clarify the quick definition
- 10:0510:05, 4 October 2016 diff hist +133 Undocumented add commas and clarifying words; making correct sentence structures. The writer does his part (an important part), and the grammarian does his part. Teamwork! Blessings to you.
3 October 2016
- 10:3510:35, 3 October 2016 diff hist +9 Golden rule add commas
- 10:2410:24, 3 October 2016 diff hist +963 N Talk:Creed of the Apostles Drawing attention to one paragraph (and then, if you wish, you could delete this section of discussion after the paragraph is modified)
- 10:1010:10, 3 October 2016 diff hist +23 Creed of the Apostles add commas and add words to help with clarity of message; see discussion page
1 October 2016
- 22:3422:34, 1 October 2016 diff hist 0 m Sarcasm fix link
- 22:3222:32, 1 October 2016 diff hist +72 Sarcasm add links
- 22:1822:18, 1 October 2016 diff hist +1,581 Sarcasm Added Isa. 28 and Sarcasm etymology; compassion and mockery do not mix ... feel free to adjust the message, if you have a wider view or clearer way to describe
30 September 2016
- 22:3122:31, 30 September 2016 diff hist +103 Template:Eyes three Hebrew words: only middle letter is different ... I hope I helped clarify. Shem letter has to do with what?
- 00:2500:25, 30 September 2016 diff hist +7 Romans 11 add commas
- 00:2000:20, 30 September 2016 diff hist +59 Hebrews 8 add commas and a few words to complete the sentence structure